I like the attempt at telling a story here, but I'm having a bit of trouble picking out the emotions, even knowing what the list is. I think it goes disgusted, frustrated, shocked, curious, guilty, dreamy, exultant, and laughing. I feel like frustrated is the one that reads strongly, but the rest are a bit muddy, and some like the third and fourth images read more as the sack moving forward rather than emoting. I think doing a sequential story might have hurt the readability on this, and I also think some more shot variety would help convey the tones better, because right now its all medium presidium shots.
I like the attempt at telling a story here, but I'm having a bit of trouble picking out the emotions, even knowing what the list is. I think it goes disgusted, frustrated, shocked, curious, guilty, dreamy, exultant, and laughing. I feel like frustrated is the one that reads strongly, but the rest are a bit muddy, and some like the third and fourth images read more as the sack moving forward rather than emoting. I think doing a sequential story might have hurt the readability on this, and I also think some more shot variety would help convey the tones better, because right now its all medium presidium shots.
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